Song I wrote - Unforgiving Days

[YoshiMike13]

Ok... If i ever get famous for being a singer, i want this to be my first song. I would aslo accept being noticed because of this song lol. Also, when you read this, you will notice that their are extra letters for some words. Dont assume that they are all just held notes because they are NOT! anything with 2 letters where there should be 1 is a held note. Anything with more than 2 where there should be 1 is a run (It is where there is a group of notes on a vowel instead of a single pitch, its hard to explain. If you dont get it, its like how christina aguilera sings all those complicated notes in some of her songs. Yes, I can do those type of things.) Here it is!!

Unforgiving Days - Mikey Pironi

Verse One:

This road, This night
Takes me, The right,
Directioon
Directiooon

Chorus:

I cant keep, Going on
'Till I know that I am strong
Oooh I can see it
I believe it
the light leeds my way
Through these unforgiving days

ooooh

Verse 2:

The world, Has its
Tough time, Which comes with,
Destructioon
Coooruption

(Chorus again)

Bridge:

IIII,
Will get through these days on my own.
And III,
Will be seen heard and known,
As the one who found his waay
Through these unforgiving daaaays

(Chorus again)

Outro:
[Getting slower]
I will find my waay
Through these unforgiving daaays


Thanks for viewing... i will make a video if you want!! :D

[BPMar]

 :party: I'd love to see the vid....you may even remind me of the guy on "The Voice" James Massone....

[YoshiMike13]

You never heard me sing though? Lol. I like that show. My guitar string is snapped so it would be a capella. I havent made all the chords anyways so i would upload it without the guitar  untill i get it perfect, then i would do it with the guitar.. What did you think of it btw?

[BPMar]

  and I like how you spelled out the words...to carry the sound out! :twirl:

[YoshiMike13]

Its my best song so far.. They seem to get better as i make more lol.

[BuffaloParrot]

Since you have 1st posted these lyrics here, on my forum I will expect nothing less than 20% of your earnings from this song  :smokinjoe:

[wishforabird]

LOL D!!!

mikey, weren't you going to get new strings last week??    when you do, take and upload a vid!! we would love to see!!!!!   

[YoshiMike13]

I wouldnt be able to upload a direct video because i have no internet at home cuz my dad is being lazy and doesnt wanna set it up. We have been paying for internet for like 3 months now but here we are with no internet!! Lol

i am going to go make a video without the guitar first anyways... I just have to send it to someone so they can upload it for me. I have debz email for that. (Dont worry she gave it to me for that reason.)

i cant wait for you guys to see it.

[Ditty]

I too want to see the vid but I DO like the lyrics!!   

[YoshiMike13]

The song is so good! I love it!!! Not to be cocky... I will send it to someone so they can post it because i cant :(